Saturday 1 April 2017

Second feedback session



Receiving feedback from our classmates, we have more things that need to be done in order to make our sequence the best it can be. We need to shorten the sequence, as it is almost getting to three minutes long. For a title sequence, this is too long; some of the narrative can be cut out and portray the same idea. We need to also re-shoot the glass pouring scenes, using one hand instead of two - this is considered more sexual. It was also suggested that we use red wine - but we can't do this as there is no other way to show that the glass is being poisoned.

We also need to configure the soundtrack to match up with the pace of the title sequence better - this will just make the overall feel of the title sequence a lot better and much more professional.

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